Kimani,+John

Speed/Style: -reasonably fast cases are fine -enunciate please -slow down for taglines -signpost well

Content: -High threshold for theory --if you use theory, justify it well, and only use it if there's clear abuse -Connect everything back to your framework, and justify your framework --normally I prefer V/VC frameworks, but I am ok with others if you justify them and explain why they are preferable